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When I Said I Do – A Romantic Monday Post

Romantic Monday

Your hand enclosed in mine
As slowly we stroll
Being here next to you
Warms my very soul

I glance towards you
And drink in your beauty
I value you just like
A pirate loves his booty

Your hazel eyes stare into me
They shatter all my walls
The pieces plummet all around
As the infrastructure falls

A gust of wind whispers
Your red locks dance in the breeze
The emotions you invoke
Nearly bring me to my knees

Your pale white skin
Glows in the sunlight
Just being here with you
Makes everything feel right

Our love has had its ups and downs
Like every love will
But not every love comes
With this undeniable thrill

Til death do us part
Was my promise to you
I meant every word
When I said I do

Other Unshitty™ Romantic Monday posts:

Hastywords – Sea Of Bodies
Still Light – In Reveal
My Addicted Obsession – Still She Loves Me
Think.Speak.Tryst – Reflection of Me
GingerSnaap – My Lover’s Arms
Start With Your Pen – I Am So Selfish
PsychedelicAbyss – Ecstacy
Shackled and Crowned – Lucky Woman
K8edid – Shift Change
Rowmantic – Tears Don’t Freeze
FortyOneTeen – Once More
Just Momentarily – Eye Contact
My Thoughts On The Subject Are As Follows – Join Me
Lyrical Anarchy – How I Feel About You Sometimes
Hastywords – Whispering Twilight
Polysyllabic Profundities – A Piece Of Her Heart
Sage Doyle – Everything
Edward Hotspur – Next
Pressimist – The Versatility of John Sullivan
My Side Of Paradise – I’ll Take Care Of You, If You Ask Me To
The Lucky Girl – A Little Bit Of Sunshine
Think.Speak.Tryst – Forevermore
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61 thoughts on “When I Said I Do – A Romantic Monday Post

  1. “I value you just like
    A pirate loves his booty”

    This is my favorite thing for the week.

    Like this

    Posted by Brother Jon | January 28, 2013, 1:00 am
  2. That last paragraph is pure romance. I loved this!

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    Posted by Jen and Tonic | January 28, 2013, 1:31 am
  3. This is breathtaking.

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    Posted by 1jaded1 | January 28, 2013, 2:05 am
  4. Twindaddy, I love this so much. It’s so perfect

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    Posted by MissFourEyes | January 28, 2013, 2:16 am
  5. Twin, this says it all…perfect. You must have been very hot in that Storm Trooper suit writing this heart melting message.

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    Posted by Life With The Top Down | January 28, 2013, 5:28 am
  6. You really are a big softie under all that armor! What a touching poem – she’s a lucky girl.

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    Posted by Polysyllabic Profundities | January 28, 2013, 7:28 am
  7. *WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO* Hot damn, that was amazeBallssss!

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    Posted by GingerSnaap | January 28, 2013, 7:55 am
  8. :)

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    Posted by Superbitch901 | January 28, 2013, 8:35 am
  9. Thank you so much for the pingback. :)

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    Posted by Shackled and Crowned | January 28, 2013, 10:01 am
  10. Love love love love love love love…oh and one more….love.

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    Posted by hastywords | January 28, 2013, 10:06 am
  11. I was going to ask if your subject is aware she is your muse, but then I read the comments. Aaaand…I agree with Jen and Tonic; that last stanza is magic.

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    Posted by Melanie | January 28, 2013, 11:26 am
  12. Awww, you ole softie!

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    Posted by The Hook | January 28, 2013, 12:35 pm
  13. Aww this is really sweet! Damn I wish someone would write me a poem! There’s no good poets left in the world.

    Ehm I mean, besides you.

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    Posted by Lily | January 28, 2013, 1:25 pm
  14. Your words are stunning! I am thankful to be included in your list.

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    Posted by deanabo | January 28, 2013, 3:27 pm
  15. Why oh why has it taken so long for me to find your writing!?! I really love this piece! I will be reading more of you.. ~ Jen. Oh, and thank you very much for the mention! I am quite honored!!

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    Posted by jenlefeverwood | January 28, 2013, 7:15 pm

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