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Poetry

Chain of Pain

Broken heart.

My most prized possession
My precious heart
Entrusted to you
You tore it apart

Swallowed by self-doubt
You pushed me away
Came crawling back
Asked me to stay

My love for you
Made me remain
You broke my heart again
Tears fell like rain

Again you came back
Admitted your mistake
I’m not quite sure
How much more I can take

Apology accepted
You are forgiven
Love says we must
Try this again

You crushed my heart
For the third time
Should have foreseen
This cowardly crime

Cannot continue
Disastrous loop
Heart is destroyed
Need to regroup

There is no clear path
Onward from here
I am now jaded
It’s your love I fear

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32 thoughts on “Chain of Pain

  1. Vivid pain in this one. Well written.

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    Posted by Polysyllabic Profundities | February 6, 2013, 7:48 am
  2. This is very relatable in my world today. Sigh.

    Good stuph, daddio, goooood stuph!

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    Posted by GingerSnaap | February 6, 2013, 8:05 am
  3. You are a poet? I didn’t know it. Well done.

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    Posted by aliceatwonderland | February 6, 2013, 11:40 am
  4. ugh.. I have been here to many times. Great writing!

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    Posted by deanabo | February 6, 2013, 4:12 pm
  5. Wow. Get out of my head!! It’s like you know me, or something!! Love this piece.. I connect with it very much. ~J

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    Posted by jenlefeverwood | February 6, 2013, 6:31 pm
  6. I hope this is not currently autobiographical, my friend

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    Posted by Elyse | February 6, 2013, 9:28 pm
  7. Wow, such passionate words. Well written, master. ;)

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    Posted by sarahneeve | February 7, 2013, 5:01 am
  8. This is someone else’s pain.

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    Posted by twindaddy | February 7, 2013, 7:03 am
  9. Heartbreaking and unforgettable.

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    Posted by The Hook | February 7, 2013, 10:16 am
  10. “Tears fell like rain” – I felt like that in the past. I read the comments and I’m glad that this isn’t a current state of mind…I should say heart. Nevertheless, it’s a great and honest piece, Twindaddy :)

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    Posted by TJLubrano | February 8, 2013, 10:43 am

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