Vivid pain in this one. Well written.
This is very relatable in my world today. Sigh.
Good stuph, daddio, goooood stuph!
I’m sorry you can relate to this. I really am.
Don’t be- it is what it is, I think.
I’m not a saint, and neither is my spouse… however, the pain you speak of is very real, but it lessons over time and space…
And that is the end of my philosophical bullshit!!
I’m still sorry. And I think I like the philosophical you. It’s much more enjoyable than the beligerant you.
Oh Pa-Leezzeee- beligerant me is waaaaay more fun than the other one!
Who in the hell would disagree with me? Sigh.
You are a poet? I didn’t know it. Well done.
Occasionaly I bust out some rhymes. Thank you.
ugh.. I have been here to many times. Great writing!
Wow. Get out of my head!! It’s like you know me, or something!! Love this piece.. I connect with it very much. ~J
I hope this is not currently autobiographical, my friend
No, it isn’t.
Good. I’m relieved.
Wow, such passionate words. Well written, master.
You know it.
Well, thank you, but I’m hardly a master.
Is this recent pain, or revisited? Heartaches hurt worse than any other, and take longer to heal.
This is someone else’s pain.
I hope they find healing. It’s a mountain-moving effort.
You’re preaching to the choir, dear Melanie.
That’s why I had my heart surgically removed and replaced with a mortar.
If only it were that easy.
Heartbreaking and unforgettable.
“Tears fell like rain” – I felt like that in the past. I read the comments and I’m glad that this isn’t a current state of mind…I should say heart. Nevertheless, it’s a great and honest piece, Twindaddy
Thank you, TJ.
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