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When you went away, I had so much to say
Why did my tongue tie in
a knot until you were away?

Then the thoughts poured through
as I asked myself
what on earth is wrong with you..(me)?

I feel that you (and I ) had the chance to dance and
I didn’t take that chance to dance
and we will never have that chance again,
will we?

You are the one that got away…
The one where our timing was not quite right
as we kissed goodnight
we both felt the pain
as we knew
that we would never speak again.


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Jaded in Detroit


5 thoughts on “You

  1. Beautiful.


    Posted by The Hook | March 29, 2013, 9:46 am
  2. This makes me think of a song, congratulations by blue October. Beautiful hun.


    Posted by Not Quite Alice | March 29, 2013, 1:03 pm


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