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Poetry

First Love

A poetic duet by Hasty Words and Twindaddy

When we were young
You thought I had cooties
You used to run
I used to chase
We both giggled
And I would pretend
Like I was going to lick your face

When we were young
We played kiss and tag
Afraid of your kiss, I ran
I believed you had cooties
But I didn’t care
Because secretly I wished
You would eventually catch me

 When we were young
The other boys
Loved to tease me
You were the first
To pack a punch
And friends for life
We did become

When we were young
The other girls
Pointed and laughed
You were the only one
To play with me
Spend time with me
To show me you cared

When we were young
You moved away
My heart hurt
It felt very sad
That was the day
I understood
What it felt like to love

When we were young
I was taken away
From you, from us
From the good times
We shared together
That was the first time
I’d ever been broken-hearted

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Discussion

48 thoughts on “First Love

  1. Awwww. You and my gf write beautifully together. ;)

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    Posted by Shackled and Crowned | April 10, 2013, 8:36 am
  2. Thank you. Hasty is amazing, really. Very creative and easy to work with.

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    Posted by twindaddy | April 10, 2013, 9:59 am
  3. Hey did you just say I was easy??? lol Yea I have a poly relationship with all my bloggers…. Real conversation last night will be posted on my blog later that has to do with this! Maybe…if i can get the nerve up :)

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    Posted by hastywords | April 10, 2013, 10:06 am
  4. OH and I LOVE this pic!

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    Posted by hastywords | April 10, 2013, 10:06 am
  5. Fabulous duet! You capture the love and pain of that experience… And it ain’t just reserved for the kiddies–the poem still fits us old folk :)

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    Posted by AR Neal | April 10, 2013, 1:36 pm
  6. I like the natural flow of this poem. I agree, you two work really well together!

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    Posted by Jen and Tonic | April 10, 2013, 2:07 pm
  7. Two of my most fav writers here!! I just love this cute little piece… if you didn’t experience something like this when you were young… then you were robbed of something very special! XoXo Love both of you!!

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    Posted by jenlefeverwood | April 10, 2013, 4:32 pm
  8. Beautiful duet! Love you both – great poem. :)

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    Posted by Nicole Marie | April 10, 2013, 5:12 pm
  9. Great work, you two!

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    Posted by The Hook | April 11, 2013, 8:17 am

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