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Poetry, Trifecta Challenge

You Lied To Me

Autumn leaves
Graced the trees
Multicolored
Gentle breeze

Inside of doors
Hand in hand
On your finger
I placed a wedding band

Forever and ever
Til death do us part
You promised to love me
With all of your heart

Times grew hard
As they always do
Bad mistakes
I made a few

You decided forever
Was too much to give
You decided my crimes
Were too much to forgive

You ended it all
Made yourself a liar
Two separate ways
Situation dire

I’m healing now
Deliberate and sure
I’ve moved on
Through this life detour

Life goes on
As it always does
Head held high
As it always was


Inspired by this week’s Trifecta Challenge.
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40 thoughts on “You Lied To Me

  1. ^5 for this stuph™.

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    Posted by AR Neal | May 16, 2013, 3:13 pm
  2. Magnificent stuff dude!

    You’ve got a good heart, bro!

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    Posted by Daan van den Bergh | May 16, 2013, 4:29 pm
  3. It seems wrong to say that the story of a marriage that then falls apart is lovely, but you’ve written it so well that it just seems, well, lovely and gentle. Maybe I’m just tired.

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    Posted by faithhopechocolate | May 16, 2013, 4:48 pm
  4. Not only do I love this poem and the use of ‘deliberate’, I love the fact that your head remains high. I applaud your strength!!

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    Posted by Polysyllabic Profundities | May 16, 2013, 5:27 pm
  5. Way to move on, TD.

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    Posted by 1jaded1 | May 16, 2013, 5:27 pm
  6. She messed up big time. I’m sorry she hurt you, but I’m glad you have come out a better, kinder man with your head held high.

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    Posted by Melanie | May 16, 2013, 7:25 pm
  7. that says it!

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    Posted by behindthemaskofabuse | May 16, 2013, 8:39 pm
  8. What Melanie said… her loss. Big loss. Some people let moments of weakness overpower them, and forget the big picture; they let go of that foundation and promise. Sad, very sad, but I am glad that you are healing with your head high.

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    Posted by the_lunatic | May 16, 2013, 8:43 pm
  9. Huggie Hugs!

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    Posted by Not Quite Alice | May 16, 2013, 8:50 pm
  10. This is really good (:

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    Posted by Draug419 | May 16, 2013, 11:25 pm
  11. His willingness and success to heal make me wonder what sort of mistakes he made, and if they were bad enough to warrant a separation. Very good writing.

    Thanks for linking up!

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    Posted by trifectawriting | May 16, 2013, 11:49 pm
  12. I also wonder what the crimes were that were unforgivable. So sad when love dissolves into separate ways.

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    Posted by jannatwrites | May 17, 2013, 12:28 am
  13. Your poetry is just…wow. All the words, so powerful.

    Hugs.

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    Posted by MissFourEyes | May 17, 2013, 8:22 am
  14. Powerful, well written. Emotional. Love it.
    Hugs.

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    Posted by Lady Lovely | May 20, 2013, 2:21 pm

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