About these ads
Poetry

Crashing Down

untitled

I’m being shut out as the world comes crashing down

The currents pull me under as I begin to drown

A single question comes to me as I fight for air

Since I am so alone should I even care

There’s no one above me to throw the saving rope

Surrounded by the darkness I slowly lose hope

Should you have to fight to gain somebody’s love

Why is it not given freely from the man up above

I’ve tried my best but it’s not good enough for you

It all came crashing down and there’s nothing I could do

 

After all that I have done, all I could’ve been

Is lost on the bottom as I remain unforgiven

I’ve made mistakes, as everyone has made

But their burden is shared, alone I have stayed

The waves come crashing down, washing me away

I’m alone on the bottom, on this, my dying day

Forever this has changed me, I’ll never be the same

Releasing my sin and hate, along with all my shame

For too long fate has stabbed at me with it’s cruel knife

Today I take it back as I reclaim my life

 

Never again will I look forward with uncertainty

Only I will choose how miserable I will be

So crash down all you want, for I have been reborn

Never again look at me with your hatred and your scorn

So crash down all you want, I won’t be in the way

I won’t drown anymore, after this, my dying day

About these ads

About Revis Edgewater

I'm Revis Edgewater, the world's only zombie killing rogue ninja. I'm also the First Knight of the Matticus Kingdom. I write stuph that's 33 grams of whatever I'm writing about.

Discussion

12 thoughts on “Crashing Down

  1. That’s amazing!

    Like

    Posted by behindthemaskofabuse | June 14, 2013, 11:09 pm
  2. This sounds promising. Not the poem… that kicked ass… I mean the attitude.

    Like

    Posted by pouringmyartout | June 14, 2013, 11:32 pm
  3. My dear Revis. This makes my heart melt. It is beautiful.

    Like

    Posted by 1jaded1 | June 15, 2013, 1:46 am
  4. Wow!

    Like

    Posted by Elyse | June 15, 2013, 9:06 am
  5. This is really good! I had to catch my breath after reading.

    Like

    Posted by Daile | June 16, 2013, 10:19 pm
  6. Reblogged this on hastywords and commented:
    TwinDaddy and a few of his fellow bloggers write for this blog. You will find all kinds of STUPH here.

    Like

    Posted by hastywords | June 19, 2013, 11:27 am

We don't tolerate scum.

Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

About these ads

American Foundation for Suicide Prevention

Out of the Darkness

Please click here to donate

Support #rawrLove

Click the pic to see how you can buy this and other #rawrLove products and support our beloved Rawra.

Support Our Bloggers!

Blog for Mental Health

Blog for Mental Health

Follow Twindaddy!

Twindaddy on Twitter! Twindaddy on G+!

Bloglovin’!

Follow on Bloglovin

Don't have enough junk in your email? Not to worry, we can help! Click the link below to have even more stuph sent to your inbox.

Join 4,409 other followers

Follow

Get every new post delivered to your Inbox.

Join 4,409 other followers

%d bloggers like this: